crit it, now

[Gunsmith]

something i did earlier, something is bothering me with it, cant think what tho :/

http://www.poddle.net/~gunsmith/carpenters.jpg

[Asterix]

that someone for your age is making pics of the carpenters?

[Gunsmith]

there's a reason behind it, all will be revealed in due time.

[Guigsy]

they look like there is some sort of anal insertion going on?

[Strych]

The shadows and lines on the man are too thick and heavy compared to the woman. Also, his face is a little too close in to hers.

[Exegesis]

i agree with debbs. but i dont think it's cuz the shadows are too thick so to say. it just seems like the difference in lighting between the two faces is off.