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Gunsmith
13th October 2004, 21:33
something i did earlier, something is bothering me with it, cant think what tho :/
http://www.poddle.net/~gunsmith/carpenters.jpg
Asterix
13th October 2004, 22:04
that someone for your age is making pics of the carpenters?
Gunsmith
13th October 2004, 22:20
there's a reason behind it, all will be revealed in due time.
Guigsy
13th October 2004, 22:39
they look like there is some sort of anal insertion going on?
Strych
13th October 2004, 23:22
The shadows and lines on the man are too thick and heavy compared to the woman. Also, his face is a little too close in to hers.
Exegesis
14th October 2004, 05:06
i agree with debbs. but i dont think it's cuz the shadows are too thick so to say. it just seems like the difference in lighting between the two faces is off.
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